Today, actually, our class had to hand in assignment about paraphrase. However, it is postponed due to our fault. We supposed to write our steps in writing it, but we just write the final result.
Since it is not submitted, I share it here. I am also going to post the revision later.
Source:
Like other exercise, laughter may have lasting benefits. Once the laughing stops, muscles are more relaxed than before it started, which could relieve some kinds of headaches. Heartbeat and blood pressure dip below normal, a sign of reduced stress. Laughter may be related to longevity, through the reduction of stress and hypertension.
After paraphrased by me:
As well as other exercise, laughter leads us to long term advantages. It can cure some kinds of headaches since it relaxes muscles. It reduces stress by lowering heartbeat and blood pressure. It may relate to longer lifespan because of the reduction of stress and abnormally high blood pressure.
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